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In The Company of Adventure
by Jorge Alves De Lima. 334
pages. 9 Color maps, 159 Black & White photos. Indexed. Hardback.
Trophy Room Books, Box 3041, Agoura, CA 91301, USA. Price: $150.
My friend Bob Poos, who at the time was the Managing
Editor of Soldier of Fortune magazine, was loath to celebrate
his fiftieth birthday by himself so the day before his birthday I
agreed to drive from my (then) home in Southern Colorado, more than
a hundred miles north to Boulder where the magazine’s offices were
located. The next day he was given an office birthday party and that
evening Bob and I went drinking to celebrate the passage of a
half-century of adventure.
That night, after a pleasant evening of sampling
Boulder’s beverages Poos leaned across the table and made a simple
statement that has stayed with me in the thirty years since that
night:
"You realize, my friend," Poos slurred, "that you
and I are of the sort of people who could die now and still have
lived more adventure than most men can dream in a lifetime."
Throughout my reading of In The Company of
Adventure the words that Poos said to me on his fiftieth kept
coming to the front of my mind because Jorge Alves De Lima had also
enjoyed a lifetime of adventure that I could only dream of.
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I am fully aware that some people may
balk at the notion of applying a reference to Peter
Capstick as a measurement of a text such as the work of
Jorge Alves De Lima. It may not be (in their view)
appropriate but my assertion is based upon my research
of Capstick’s texts as part of the research supporting
my graduate studies at the University of North Dakota.
In my study of how an outdoor adventure text affects the
reader I found that Capstick had taken Hemingway’s
"Iceberg Principle" of writing and expanded upon it by a
reapplication of the principle to a succession of
paragraphs, with each paragraph resolving issues of the
previous paragraph. Thus, because of this pattern of
constructing text Capstick’s writing had a pronounced
affect on readers. They continued to read his text
because the only way to obtain a resolution to each
paragraph is to read the next, and the next, and the
next, but with the full awareness that each paragraph
would be, in part, unresolved. Capstick’s trademark as
an author, then, is this constant building of
anticipation by the reader.
Many Capstick readers have remarked that after they
began reading one of his books they were unable to put
the book down, regardless of their feelings toward the
author "because of the anticipation of what would happen
next." Another, frequently heard comment, is that after
reading a Capstick book the reader felt physically
tired, as if they had been with him in the story. This
sort of tension building is a literary device commonly
used by skilled fiction writers but rarely by authors of
nonfiction unless they are falling back on creative
nonfiction as their form. "The Capstick affect" is this
paragraph building of sustained tension in a nonfiction
adventure text. |
Jorge was born into Brazilian aristocracy and wealth
and he was educated in the United States. He enjoyed a comfortable
lifestyle that he could have easily maintained if he had followed
the path his father had planned for him. Instead, in 1947 in New
York Harbor he boarded a small passenger ship that was bound for
London where he bought a Holland and Holland .500/.465 double rifle,
a military .30-06 rifle and a .30-06 hunting rifle and then set off
on his dream—to be an African White Hunter.
The difference between Jorge and most people is he
accomplished his dream—he became a white hunter. He was in the right
place at the right time. By the fortunate convergence of politics,
economics and the world’s interest in Africa, when Jorge entered
French Equatorial Africa the old order of colonialism still
dominated local politics and the stampede of tourist-hunters that
would follow on the heels of Robert Ruark and Hemingway’s second
safari were more than two decades away. Consequently, Africa,
especially that half of Africa from the equator south, still
included vast tracts of lands filled with game and magnificent
trophies. After a few false steps Jorge managed to insert himself
into the world of professional hunting and he killed his first
elephant—making that leap from sport hunter to professional hunter.
But Jorge maintained a strong connection to the
ideals of the sport hunter. Early in the text, on page 37, Jorge
relates the story of a hartebeest hunt. His brother and a wealthy
uncle had decided to join him in Africa for a safari (one that Jorge
hadn’t planned for), and the two brothers were hunting Lord Derby
Eland when they came upon a small herd of hartebeests. The two
brothers decided to shoot two of the animals for meat because both
their camp and the nearby village larders were both empty. Both
brothers fired and two of the hartebeests broke away from the herd.
They crossed the boundary between the free hunting zone and the game
reserve. Jorge explains that "both animals were mortally wounded and
with no chance of survival" and they could not leave the animals to
suffer. The two brothers went into the reserve and killed the
wounded animals. Most of the meat was taken to the local village for
distribution and the remainder was taken to their camp. "I had
followed the rules of proper sportsmanship and the fact that the
final chapter of the chase took place inside the reserve boundary
never bothered me." This vignette of a single hunt sets the stage
for much of Jorge’s text. There is, in fact, an attention to
sportsmanship throughout the book and he frequently writes of the
importance he felt of insuring that the meat from the elephant,
rhino and other game that he killed was properly distributed to the
nearby villages.
Jorge also explains that even with the liberal
licenses enjoyed by the white hunters and the vast numbers of game,
some hunters still killed game to excess. Jorge, however, didn’t
have the stomach for the sort of killing of game that was modus
operandi of some hunters. On page 90 Jorge writes about meat
hunting cape buffalo in Mozambique. ". . . I had already shot what I
considered a rather shameful number of buffalo. They were so
plentiful, that in a short period I made a substantial profit.
However, this indiscriminate slaughter was not sporting." What he
seemed to be searching for was a personal balance between the
business of hunting and the sport of hunting. He found that balance.
To Live a True Adventure
When he had finished with the meat hunting episode
Jorge returned to what he truly loved—hunting elephant. Life for
Jorge was good and he was living the life of adventure that he had
dreamed of as a child. The elements of adventure that stand out in
his personal history is not the number of elephants he killed or the
tons of ivory he sold but the way that he lived his dream. When
other, less courageous men, were staying closer to established camps
Jorge was trekking deeper into the bush and setting fly camps on the
spoor of the elephants he was tracking. When other hunters would
turn back from the onslaught of the tsetse fly he pressed on. This
does not mean he was stupid about his hunting—on more than one
occasion he writes about turning back when the odds began to stack
too heavily against him.
In my reading of travelogues and what I call
adventurelogues one of the elements I always look for is how willing
the author is to admit his failures as well as triumphs. I am not
talking about the fashionable mea culpa nonsense that has
become so common by today’s weak writers, but the
honest-to-God-I-failed admission that make a remarkable story much
more rewarding to read. That’s the mark, I believe, of the true
adventure story and you don’t have to read very many of today’s
"keyboard commando adventures" before you can smell the rat of
chest-pounding bravado. Jorge does not pound his chest and he admits
his failures, whether it is a poorly placed shot or not correctly
reading the spoor and wind.
Sensing the Future
Given the time period he was in Africa it is a safe
assumption that Jorge was well acquainted with the stirrings of a
new political climate. When he began his remarkable adventure the
smoke hadn’t completely cleared from World War Two’s battlefields
and no one was expecting things in Africa to change, at least not
until Africa was ready for change. Early in Chapter Twelve Jorge
relates the story of his meeting with a Portuguese nurse in a remote
village. The nurse was "a fine young man in his thirties with blue
eyes and thick, black, well-trimmed moustache" (101). He had been
drawn to the nurse by stories of the man’s abilities as an elephant
hunter. Their conversation "centered on elephant hunting, lion and
the future of African colonies. That subject appeared to be crucial
to all residents of Africa, mainly to those who loved it, had family
there and wished to remain. This preoccupation was subjugating the
hopes of many white men living in different parts of Africa" (Ibid).
Jorge writes that the end of the colonial era was expected and was,
in fact, the dream of many, but no one expected it to end with the
colossal upheavals that would rewrite borders and kills
tens-of-thousands, if not millions of people. Sprinkled throughout
his text Jorge hints at the gathering storm but unlike many authors
of that period he does not allow the political problems and their
ramifications into the hunting world to sidetrack his purpose, which
in this text is the adventure he was living.
By
the time a reader has reached the mid-point of Jorge’s book the
question that begins to nag is if the adventure Jorge is living can
be sustained for another hundred and fifty or so pages or, as is
often case, will the book become a tiresome repetition of the
stories that have already been told, i.e. same plots but
different characters? There is a danger of this happening in this
book because we are reading how Jorge saw and lived his life between
1948 and the end of the colonial era. He avoids the problem although
there are some near misses because of the way that he has
constructed the book—it is not a liner text, thus the danger of
repeating a story is always present. In a liner text the author
begins at point A and writes through the events to point Z. The
letters between A and Z are the different stories the author wishes
to relate and because the stories are liner, one following the other
in chronological order, there is little danger of repeating the
story. Jorge’s stories are based on a liner account of his Africa
adventure but he does not follow the straight path—he meanders
between highpoints and on occasion he writes about an incident in
one story (chapter) and then repeats a part of that incident in
another story. When writers are "weaving a tale" this is where they
trip up themselves. One account does not match the next. (I’ve
written more than one review of personal adventure stories where
I’ve questioned the author’s veracity because events didn’t match.)
In my reading of this book that problem never crops up and what is
truly enjoyable about In The Company of Adventure is that
when Jorge does refer back to something he always does so in a
slightly different viewpoint so the reader is treated to a
confirmation of the event previously told. Additionally, he takes an
unusual risk of allowing his brother, Eduardo, to write a chapter
about the same hunt that he, Jorge, had written about earlier. The
effect is pleasing to the reader’s ear because it is as if two
people are telling the same story with different viewpoints.
There is one other "standard" to which a personal
adventure text can be applied and I call it "the Capstick effect" of
the "adventurelogue." (See the sidebar for a more detailed
explanation.) In this approach to a story the author builds a scene
with successive powerful sentences then ends each paragraph with a
strong, compelling statement that drives the scene onward. An
example of how Jorge handles this approach to adventure writing is
the story of a lion that he killed—dramatically.
What
an unforgettable spectacle that magnificent beast was giving me, its
mane fluttering against the wind and still uttering feeble but quite
audible grunts. It seemed at that particular moment that he was
grumbling about life, ignoring manifestations that were to be his
death sentence. Busy with his moans, he did not suspect my approach.
We were separated by less than 100 meters, and I was trying to leave
my position from behind in order to make a detour to his left to aim
at his shoulder. To close in was not my objective, because as it had
happened on other hunts the negative consequences of too close an
encounter were still fresh in my memory. The combination of my
recent bout of malaria added to my eagerness and excitement left me
once more, somehow unstable, breathing with difficulty, and unsteady
hands. In order to regain emotional stability as quickly as
possible, I had to keep a cool head and exercise control over my
men, now excited to the extreme. The imminent danger, the
possibility of an abrupt attack and the loss of a great opportunity
to conquer a splendid prize are always present. Therefore, it is
important for the hunter to control the situation, for these
opportunities last only a few seconds. Success and failure go hand
in hand. Bear in mind that in the majority of instances very
favorable circumstances rarely repeat themselves. (267-8)
Tension, power, color, self-doubt blended with the
author’s determination to see the episode through to the end are all
present and with the last sentence there is no reader desire to stop
reading but a need to continue reading, to learn what the
outcome will be even though the reader already knows the author
survived—but how? These are the powerful tools of good writing being
put to work by a skilled writer. By the time a reader has finished
with Jorge’s book there is a sense of exhaustion, of wonderment—just
how in the hell did one man manage to live that adventure?
Galen
L. Geer is a former United States Marine Drill Instructor
and Vietnam veteran. A professional outdoor
hunting, shooting and gun writer, he published
2000 magazine articles. He has been a contributing editor to Soldier of
Fortune magazine for thirty years and is the author of seven
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In The Company of Adventure is worth reading,
worth keeping on the bookshelf and returning to on long nights when
scudding clouds and forbidding weather move a person to keep the
hearth logs burning while the dog sleeps nervously between the fire
and his master.
And, whether the reader is dreaming of adventures to come or
remembering adventures of the past, this is a book that prods the
reader to think about their life, just as Poos’ fiftieth birthday
prodded him to think of his past adventures, and mine, and then
point out that we had many more to come.
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